The Independent Variable

Thursday, September 21, 2006

Deeply Engraved!!

When she beamed
She beamed without me noticing
Noticing wouldn’t make it as natural as it did
It did make my day
*****
I’ve been waiting for this flash
A flash, I captured with ma heart
Ma heart started rhyming again!
Rhymin’ again as never had
*****
It was so peaceful so sincere
So sincere as a blossom to a flower
A flower that scarified its beauty
Beauty that returned back sweet-scented
*****
Awaiting, another glimpse
Glimpse that evokes more memories
Memories Deeply Engraved!!

4 Comments:

  • I must say that I've never came across such a poem ever before..this was just UNIQUE and special..
    A peice of ART..
    Loved it

    By Blogger Hope, at 10:45 PM  

  • Lovely poem :)

    By Blogger IntI, at 4:11 PM  

  • Lonely:

    Girl, that is so inspiring and motivating.
    it makes me so proud that you loved it and thought its unique, although i'm not a pro and it's ma second attempt ever.

    thanks again

    stick around :)

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 12:03 AM  

  • bluewaves:

    thanks :)

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 12:04 AM  

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