The Independent Variable

Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Hypocrisy!!



“Whispering in Her ears”
A trust that isn’t worth giving
 Gained by wasted scum

“Facing Him {someone I know}”
You aren’t getting my forgiving
Sorry, you got to be in a sewage drum
*******

“Still Talking to Him”
Life is too short to hide the real you
Yes I hate hypocrites, do you hate them too
 Why, I can no more believe you
 When you claim one plus one is two
*******

“Complaining to Her”
Lowlife hypocrites are everywhere
Fact! They never give up chasing
They are good in filling an empty sphere
Do they dare Facing?
*******

“Smiling at Her”
I disgust those who act phony
Please, don’t be like them Honey

posted by EaGleT at 1:54 AM

8 Comments:

  • Nice!
    very new style, but i didnt know whoz hypocrite now he or she?! or both :)

    By Blogger IntI, at 6:50 PM  

  • I'm here tryin to work a Sonnet poetry style that consists of 14 lines with contemporary rhythmic sound.


    I'm refering to him but that doesn't mean she couldn't be a hypocrite too. Thats why i asked her not to be like him. because i cant bear the shock of she being one, and that was indicated by the word "Honey"

    thanx, and stick around ;)

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 7:31 PM  

  • hey you :D
    nice job... however, i dont recommend this style, it's a bit rigid, free urself.. it's for really really professionals..
    keep it up man!
    i like ur work :D
    hey, check out Emily Dickenson, and Ezra Pound, veeeeeeery awsome!

    By Blogger Reem, at 9:22 AM  

  • Hala Reem,
    well, the piece didn't take a great deal of effort to produce. i haven't struggled, so its all good :D

    Plus, i was dared to do a sonnet. So it was just an attempt after all.

    Writing poetry is not what i'm good at, but i'm doin it for fun :)

    I've been tryin reading some poems, but not really into them,, as i said, doin it for fun :P...

    anyway, whenever i get the mood of reading poems, i'll definetly check Dickenson and Pound,,

    BTW, am free and cool, just as you know me ;)

    thanks sweety,

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 1:10 AM  

  • ;D keep it babe boy

    By Blogger Reem, at 1:29 AM  

  • sure i'll ;)

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 2:49 PM  

  • nice work
    thanx for letting me see ur work
    we sure do learn form life
    "ME"

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 1:52 AM  

  • "ME":
    and thanks for caring to read and drop comments

    indeed we learn a lot and much more than we could think

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 3:25 PM  

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