The Independent Variable

Wednesday, April 18, 2007

Fragmented Picture!


Of various Fragments it consists,
Visible and Distinguished
As Stars in Foremost,
Clear and Burnished
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Fragments got crystallized!! Being Seductive
Tempting, with no favour to resist
Yet! It’s a Curse receptive
Till Spirit decides to insist
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It doesn’t require heaps,
Wisdom in a peaceful day
Indeed, hide your thoughts from your lips
They are contained where they lay
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A scrambled picture formed in brain
Envision wisely, before it goes in drain

6 Comments:

  • very well writen. nice seeing u blogging again. keep it up.

    By Blogger IntI, at 10:45 PM  

  • thank ya waves,
    yeah, i'll be on and off, now and then ;)

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 8:37 PM  

  • Eaglet....Very nice piece of work..
    Well done..

    I like in your peoms, the way you put life aspects in a way that gives them life and sprit.
    Dead concepts are pictured a life in our minds in your work..

    so all what i can say is well done..:)

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 3:10 PM  

  • Hi there,
    its been a while...
    You have good choice of words and its well written...

    keep us updated..
    "ME"

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 2:53 PM  

  • huda,,
    life is my primary source of inspiration, thats way i prefer getting it served with most of my work

    thanks 4 the nice words though :)

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 8:31 AM  

  • "ME"
    its just a fictional thought influenced by factual events that found its way to this place.

    glad you liked it,,
    stick around

    By Blogger EaGleT, at 8:53 AM  

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